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The Fox's Secret:
Voici mon secret. Il est très simple
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English translations

(English translations) ▼ Here is my secret. It is very simple ▶ One sees clearly only with the heart ▶ What is essential is invisible to the eyes

 

 

Voici mon secret. Il est très simple -- is translated as 'And now here is my secret, a very simple secret' by Katherine Woods.

As in the French original, this conveys two messages:

1. The fox announces that he is about to reveal his promised secret. ('And now here is my secret'.)
2. The fox comments on the simple nature of the secret. ('a very simple secret'.)

Here we will take a look at how the two French sentences are translated into English in the five published translations.

  Translation Voici mon secret. Il est très simple:
1 Woods 1943 And now here ismy secret, a very simple secret:
2 Cuffe 1995 Now here is my secret -- very simply:
3 Testot-Ferry 1995 Now here is my secret. It's very simple.
4 Wakeman 1997 This is my secret. It's very simple:
5 Howard 2000 Here is my secret. It's quite simple:

 

(1) Voici: 'Here is': In English, the normal equivalent of voici is 'here is...'. That's the term used by four English-language translators. Only Wakeman differs by using a direct translation from the French: 'This is my secret'.

Interestingly, three of the five translators add 'and now' or 'now' in front of 'here is'. Obviously they feel that this makes the fox's speech more natural or easier to understand in English.

This particular use of 'now' is the same as that in:

'And now, ladies and gentlemen, the person you've all been waiting for!'

It not only indicates present time, it also suggests a progression to a new stage or a new idea. In fact, there are cases (for example, when someone says: 'Now this is how I see it:...') where 'now' conveys only the fact that something important is about to be said. The sense of 'present time' is almost entirely absent.

In the fox's secret, the meaning of '(and) now' seems to be somewhere in between these two usages. That is, it serves both to spell out the idea of 'the next step' (telling the secret), but also indicates 'present time'.

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(3) Mon: 'my':

The fox refers to the secret as mon secret, using the masculine possessive pronoun mon ('my').

The English translators all use the pronoun 'my'. This is the possessive pronoun equivalent to mon, although English doesn't distinguish between masculine and feminine pronouns.

'My' is used in a similar way to French mon. It conveys exactly the same meaning as the French, namely, 'that particular secret -- the one that I mentioned earlier -- that belongs to me'.

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(4) Secret: The word word secret is translated as 'secret'. The English meaning of this word is largely the same as the French:

  1. a. Something kept hidden or unexplained : MYSTERY
    b : something kept from the knowledge of others or shared only confidentially with a few
    c : a method, formula, or process used in an art or a manufacturing operation and divulged only to those of one's own company or craft
  2. Something taken to be a key to a desired end <the secret of longevity>

Here, the fox's 'secret' fits both senses:

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(5) The translation of il est très simple:

All English translators use the word 'simple' or 'simply' to translate the word simple. The words in the two languages are identical in spelling and meaning, and there is no problem using the English word as an equivalent of the French.

Très is translated as 'very' by three translators and 'quite' by one. Again, this is not problematic.

The major difference comes in the way the grammatical construction itself is rendered. Three of the English translators use the literal equivalent of il est, that is, 'it is'. Two translators go out of their way to change 'it's very simple' into something else.

Both translations are subtly different from the original.

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(6) Level of formality

In the original French, the fox's speech is concise and simple. While this makes for a certain literary elegance, a direct translation into English runs the risk of being stiff and wooden. Only Howard and Wakeman faithfully adhere to the French original: 'Here/This is my secret. It's quite/very simple'. The other translators all depart in some way from the French:

In all of these cases the translators appear to be striving to make the speech of the fox more colloquial and lifelike than a direct translation from the French would be.

See here for analysis of the Chinese and Japanese versions.

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